Wolf(LL4)

[Abbey]

A lone she-wolf lay in the middle of a clearing. Her pelt was black, but her paws, ears, and tail were white. As if they had been washed of sin. The fea blinked her dark green eyes, and padded over to a small stream. She sighed, as she looked down at her reflection."Oh Kara,"She whispered,"What has happened to you?" Tears began to fall from Kara's eyes, as memories from her past came to her....Memories of her mistake...

You see, in Kara's old pack, her mother and father were Alphas. And Kara was next in line. Kara's sister, Nala, couldn't have been happier. But the rest of the pack, didn't share her feelings. They new that Nala was still too younge to be Alpha, so if something happened to Kara, another wolf would take her place. Nala heard of these plans, and ran off to warn Kara. But Kara didn't believe her sister. She thought it was a trap, and that Nala was leading her into it. Then, something horrible happened. Something that Kara deeply regrets. You see, when Nala tried to make Kara leave, Kara snapped.

She attacked her sister, and killed her. Soon, she found out it was a big mistake. The pack was devastated upon hearing Nala's death, and explained what had happened. Miserable, and full of guilt, Kara left the pack in search of a new beginning...or an end.(Sorry if its a little long)

[Queen Ereli]

((All righty, bye! And your intro wasn't too long, it was very nice. But why were the paragraphs all chopped up like that? oO Now, let me take a crack at this. Can't be much harder than Neo rp. XDDD))

The trees parted and gave way to a clearing. A wolfess peeked through them to observe. She was often called beautiful, her soft yet with a sort of roughness reddish-brown fur the envy of many, with black fur round her ankles down. Her black claws were sharp, and her russet tail had just the right amount of fluffiness to be pretty, but not so much it was overwhelming like that of a Golden retriever.

She spotted another wolfess across the stream with her piercing black eyes, her tail and ears erect. The nose at the end of her auburn muzzle was black as her eyes and socks, and very sensitive. Her teeth were white, always whiter than white no matter what she ate, and sharp as her claws.

Who might this be? she wondered slyly, staying still, not moving forward even an inch.

((Whew, hope I did okay XD))

[Abbey]

Yeah sorry about that, it was my intro for neo xD I only got rid of all the '(c)'s and the '(d) you did pwnsome!)

Kara sighed softly, and looked around. An ear twitched slightly, as she got scent of a feas scent. She'll let her presance be known when she wants it to be.Kara thought, as she walked away from the stream, in search of prey.

[Queen Ereli]

((Thanks ^^ Oh, and it's 'presence', and if it's LL4, try to make each post 5 or more lines. :] ))

Her brows raised; she'd been spotted. Or rather, smelt. She detected no danger, so she ambled forth out of the trees and sat on a rock at the stream's bank, her posture perfect, her tail swishing back and forth as she watched the other cautiously. And then she spoke.

"Hello there," she said, her voice like warm, melting honey. "Is this your territory? If so, pardon me for intruding. I shall depart at once if that is your desire." She wasn't in the mood for any sort of fight, and though was vicious in one, her nature was easygoing and very go-with-the-flow.

[Abbey]

(Oops Sorry)

Kara turned her head toward the fea. "Yes, this is my Terra. And no, you are not intruding. Stay as long as you like." She said, smiling. "I'm Kara by the way."

Finally, Kara thought, Someone with manners. Kara scanned the fea momentarily, before adding, "I was just about to hunting. Care to join me?"

[Queen Ereli]

((No biggie. ^^ What's a fea? XD))

"Of course," she said, backing up and leaping the small way across the stream to the bankside on which Kara was. She landed gracefully on the grass. "I would be pleased to go hunting with you, Kara. My name is Lilly."

She didn't much care for her name, but took what she'd gotten with a smile. All her siblings had the names of flowers, and though flowers weren't very wolfish names, they all accepted them. Lilly was the only one of her siblings who truly wished she had another.

[Abbey]

(Female. I'm so used to shortening it on neo, I forgot to spell it out on here xD)

"Well, welcome to the Luna Pack terratory Lilly." Kara smiled, as she got up and walked towards the forest.

"Follow me, I'll show you the best hunting spot here." She added, as she walked into the trees. She seems very nice. Kara though, as she lowered her maw and sniffed the forest floor.

[Queen Ereli]

Lilly followed Kara into the trees, sniffing as well. She wondered why she'd agreed to hunt with her in the first place. Lilly had... problems. When she was predator and found prey, she had no control. It was the curse bestowed upon her at birth. Said curse involved other things, but that was her concern now. Still... what could possibly happen? And she hadn't eaten in days.

[Abbey]

Kara hummed softly to herself, as she poked her nose in a small bush.
SHe pulled her head out, and turned to Lilly."I smell a rabbits burrow on the other side." She whispered.
Quietly, she pushed herself into the bush, and looked out the other side, carfuly.

[Queen Ereli]

Lilly followed silently. She too could smell the rabbits. Already she could feel her mind going fuzzy. "Perhaps," she said quickly, "I should go hunt elsewhere. Pardon me." She dashed away in the opposite direction, catching the smell of more rabbits. She blacked out and when she woke up, her stomach was full and only the smell of rabbit blood let her know that she had eaten. "Damn," she grumbled, and made her way back to the clearing. She laid down on the grass under a big oak tree and watched the stream lazily flow by.

[Abbey]

Kara walked back into the clearing, a rabbit in her maw. Blood slowly dripped onto her white paws.

Kara padded over to the stream, set the rabbit down, and dipped her paw into the water. "Are you all right?" Kara asked, turning her head and looking at Lilly.

[Queen Ereli]

((Maw would be mouth, right? XD))

Lilly's ears, extra-sensitive even for a wolf, perked up at the soft padding of Kara's paws. She looked over at the other wolf unperturbedly, though a flicker of worry brushed through her black eyes. It was gone soon as it arrived. Lilly looked back at the water and sighed.

"Yes," she answered finally. "I'm quite all right. I see you've found your meal without trouble."

[Abbey]

(rofl, yuppers)

Kara nodded. "The prey here, though plentiful, are very dim-witted." She replied, lowering her head to the creek so she could take a drink.

Once Kara lifted her head once more, she laid down, and began to eat.

[Queen Ereli]

"Yes," she agreed coolly, "I found my meal quite quickly. There is much for us in these lands. And they're beautiful, over all that. I must say I envy you for having such beauty be all yours. Are you Alpha, by chance?"

Lilly made sure not to think of Kara's meal as prey. It was already dead, so that made it easier by far. Kara looked so much like her sister, Daisy... and Lilly was certain she did not want to see Kara's mangled body at her feet.

[Abbey]

Kara lifted her head. "Yes. I come from a long line of Alphas." She winced slightly as she added the last part, but shook her head slightly, and continued eating.

I mustn't think of that. Not now... Kara thought.