Akia
Civilian
I laugh, cry, and kill. That okay?
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Post by Akia on Sept 28, 2007 21:32:26 GMT -5
Rain. That's all there is in Musie. Rain, clouds,and death. The country was separated from the content Dhoti because of the wars they started with every content, including there one. Amarie was only three when her parents where slaughtered. No one cared. It was normal, like when you wake up in the morning. The group always came around every three days of each week to feed on human flesh, and if they didn't, they would blow up Musie. Tear limbs off one by one, watch the tears go down. That's what they said before feasting. Amarie was the keeper of air, which is symbolizes in her neck-less, which is a white swirl and in the middle a silver gem. She always had it, and so did her sister, who was the keeper of fire. They got separted when they where born. Now, this is when everything starts. Get ready......
See ya in part 2 ^_^
COPY RIGHT TO ALL CHARACTERS PLACES AND PLOT OF MINE cause i'll kill you if you do >=D
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Akia
Civilian
I laugh, cry, and kill. That okay?
Posts: 45
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Post by Akia on Sept 29, 2007 22:28:47 GMT -5
yeah, and please comment on the stories? I like getting critized in my writting, to see what i need to work on, and what you think about it ^_^
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Post by Katie on Sept 30, 2007 21:12:49 GMT -5
I like it so far...but how do you pronounce Amarie?
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Akia
Civilian
I laugh, cry, and kill. That okay?
Posts: 45
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Post by Akia on Sept 30, 2007 21:31:12 GMT -5
it's pronounced Ah marie
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Post by Katie on Oct 1, 2007 16:20:24 GMT -5
okay, thats pretty. : )
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Akia
Civilian
I laugh, cry, and kill. That okay?
Posts: 45
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Post by Akia on Oct 1, 2007 16:29:28 GMT -5
thank you ^__^ watch out for part 2 ^_^
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